When I first read Lawrence's poetry, I didn't like it much, but I had no difficulty in understanding it. But when in 1935, I first tried to read Marianne Moore's poems, I simply could not make head or tail of them. To begin with, I could not "hear" the verse. One may have a prejudice against Free Verse as such but, if it is in any way competendy written, the ear immediately hears where one line ends and another begins, for each line represents either a speech unit or a thought unit. Accent has always played so important a role in English prosody that no Englishman, even if he has been brought up on the poetry written according to the traditional English prosodic convention in which lines are scanned by accentual feet, iambics, trochees, anapaests, etc., has any difficulty in recognizing as formal and rhythmical a poem, like
they are to me
like enchanted Earl Gerald who changes himself into a stag, to a great green-eyed cat of the mountain. Discommodity makes
them invisible; they've disappeared. The Irish say your trouble is their
trouble and your
joy their joy? I wish I could believe it;
I am troubled, I'm dissatisfied, I'm Irish.
Uncomprehending as I was, I felt attracted by the tone of voice, so I persevered and I am very thankful that I did, for today there are very few poets who give me more pleasure to read. What I did see from the first was that she is a pure "Alice." She has all the Alice qualities, the distaste for noise and excess:
Poets, don't make a fuss; the elephants crooked trumpet' 'doth write;' and to a tiger-book I am reading—
I think you know the one— I am under obligation.
One may be pardoned, yes I know one may, for love undying.
The passion for setting people right is in itself
an afflictive disease. Distaste which takes no credit to itself is best
the fastidiousness:
I remember a swan under the willows in Oxford, with flamingo-coloured, maple-
leaflike feet. It reconnoitred like a battleship. Disbelief and conscious fastidiousness were
the staple
ingredients in its
disinclination to move. Finally its hardihood
was not proof against its proclivity to more fully appraise such bits of food as the stream bore counter to it; it made away with what I gave it to eat. I have seen this swan and
I have seen you; I have seen ambition without understanding in a variety of forms
the love of order and precision:
And as
MEridian one-two one-two gives, each fifteenth second
in the same voice, the new data—"The time will be" so and so— you realize that "when you hear the signal," you'll be hearing Jupiter or jour pater, the day god—
the salvaged son of Father Time— telling the cannibal Chronos
(eater of his proxime new-born progeny) that punctuality is not a crime
the astringent ironical sharpness:
One may be a blameless bachelor and it is but a step to Congreve.
She says, "This butterfly,
this waterfly, this nomad
that has proposed
to setde on my hand for life'.—
what can one do with it.
There must have been more time
in Shakespeare's day
to sit and watch a play.
You know so many artists who are fools."
He says; "You know so many fools
who are not artists."
Like Lawrence's, many of Miss Moore's best poems are, overtly, at least, about animals. Animals have made their appearance in literature in a number of ways.