It has always seemed to me that a real thought, not an argument can only exist in verse, or in some poetic form. There is a didactic element about prose thoughts which makes them repellent, slightly bullying, "He who hath wife and children hath given hostages to fortune." There is a point well put: but immediately it irritates by its assertiveness. If it were put into poetry, it would not nag at us so practically. We don't want to be nagged at.
(Preface to "Pansies.")
Though I personally love good prose aphorisms, I can see what Lawrence means. If one compares
with
The accursed power that stands on Privelege
And goes with Women and Champagne and Bridge
Broke, and Democracy resumed her reign
That goes with Bridge and Women and Champagne
the first does seem a bit smug and a bit abstract, while, in the second, the language dances and is happy.
The bourgeois produced the Bolshevist inevitably As every half-truth at length produces the contradiction
of itself In the opposite half-truth
has the worst of both worlds; it lacks the conciseness of the prose and the jollity of the rhymed verse.
The most interesting verses in the last poems of Lawrence belong to a literary genre he had not attempted before, satirical doggerel.
If formal verse can be likened to carving, free verse to modeling, then one might say that doggerel verse is like
It is a different kind of satire from that written by Dryden and Pope. Their kind presupposes a universe, a city, governed by, or owing allegiance to, certain eternal laws of reason and morality; the purpose of their satire is to demonstrate that the individual or institution they are attacking violates these laws. Consequendy, the stricter in form their verse, the more artful their technique, the more effective it is. Satirical doggerel, on the other hand, presupposes no fixed laws. It is the weapon of the outsider, the anarchist rebel, who refuses to accept conventional laws and pieties as binding or worthy of respect. Hence its childish technique, for the child represents the naive and personal, as yet uncorrupted by education and convention. Satire of the Pope kind says: "The Emperor is wearing a celluloid collar. That simply isn't done." Satiric doggerel cries: "The Emperor is naked."
At this kind of satiric doggerel, Lawrence turned out to be a master.
And Mr. Meade, that old old lily,
Said: "Gross, coarse, hideous!" and I, like a silly
Thought he meant the faces of the police court officials
And how right he was, so I signed my initials.
But Tolstoi was a traitor To the Russia that needed him most, The great bewildered Russia So worried by the Holy Ghost; He shifted his job onto the peasants And landed them all on toast.
Parnassus has many mansions.
MARIANNE MOORE